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Clear Data Collection: You have gathered some useful information about what people like and what they find easy or difficult. This will help you in your game design process. Variety of Information: You’ve included questions about skills, preferences, and difficulty, which gives a good range of detail about basketball and football. Suggestions for Improvement:

Organise Your Information: The way the data is presented is a bit difficult to follow. Try organising it into clear points or a table. For example:

Number of people who like basketball: 2 Number of people who like football: 4
This will make your work easier to read and understand.

Explain the Numbers (6 x2/＞10/11/＜8): These numbers are not clear. Are they age groups, scores, or something else? Please explain so readers can understand what they mean.

Summary of Findings: Don’t forget to write a brief summary of what the data shows. For example:

"More people like football than basketball. Some find football or basketball difficult, but many enjoy playing games that use both hands and feet."

You’ve done a good job gathering data! With more organisation and clearer explanations, your work will improve even more. Well done!

Inya - Chosen design 26-3-25.pdf

Find attached your feedback and results for your Game Design project.

Your work was marked using the MYP Design criteria:

Criterion A: Inquiring and Analysing
Criterion B: Developing Ideas
Criterion C : Creating the Solution
Criterion D : Evaluating

Each section is scored out of 8. This is based on the MYP scoring system, where:
1 = beginning level, and 8 = excellent performance.

These scores show how well you met the expectations for each part of the design cycle.

Please read your feedback carefully and think about how you can use it to improve your next project.

Inya - Portfolio feedback + scoring.pdf

inya-x27-s-portfolio.pdf