@Arya

Simple and Clear Conclusion: You’ve written a clear conclusion, which is good. It shows you’ve summarised your findings and identified key points. Focus on Key Preferences: Noting that most students like teamwork and kicking, as well as being good at shooting and kicking, is helpful for designing your game. Suggestions for Improvement:

Provide More Details: Your conclusion is clear but very brief. Try to include more data to support your findings. For example:

How many students like teamwork? How many are good at shooting or kicking the ball? This will make your conclusion stronger.

Explain the Connection: Take the time to explain what your findings mean for your game. For example:

"Since most students like teamwork and kicking, the game design could focus on team-based activities that involve shooting and kicking."

Include Data Variety: While the conclusion mentions sports in general, it doesn’t specify whether students prefer basketball, football, or another sport. Adding details based on the questions you asked (e.g., whether they prefer basketball or football) would give a clearer picture.

Avoid Repetition: Saying “kicking the ball” and “shooting the ball” twice in different ways might confuse the reader. Make it more concise. For example:

"Most students like team sports and are skilled at kicking and shooting the ball."

Your work is straightforward, which is a great start! Next time, include more specific data and link it more clearly to your game design ideas. Keep it up!