Exit Ticket

---

Soren
[Photo]

1. I should add more text and I should have more detail have more pictures, and I'll make it more appealing
2. Nothing
3. 4

@Quentin By the way you are in Design Group 2. So you have added this comment to the wrong group.

Great observations! Adding more text and details will help you thoroughly explain your ideas and make your portfolio more comprehensive. Including more pictures will make it visually engaging and provide a clearer representation of your concepts. However, remember to balance visuals with detailed explanations—every picture or element should serve a purpose and help communicate your message. Think about using captions or short descriptions for your images to further guide the reader. Do have a think on your immediate actions you will take to improve your portfolio?

@Alynah-Nayamuth By the way you are in Design Group 2. So you have commented in the wrong group.
That’s an excellent idea! A well-designed cover with a striking picture can create a strong first impression. Consider choosing an image that represents the theme or essence of your work. For the writing, focus on explaining your thought processes, decisions, and reflections in detail. This balance of text and visuals will make your portfolio both informative and visually appealing.

@Inya The costume design project required a portfolio, so consider reflecting on what you’ve completed (such as sketches). Including more pictures is a brilliant idea! Visuals can make your portfolio more engaging while also helping to clarify the points you want to communicate. As you add pictures, ensure they are relevant, well-positioned, and accompanied by captions or explanations to directly connect them with your text. This will help the reader better understand how the visuals support your process and outcomes.

@Arya A score of 8 reflects your confidence in your work, which is fantastic to see. However, take some time to reflect on how the portfolio you submitted for the Costume Design project compares to the exemplars. Did you include a similar number of pages and provide the same level of detail? Updating the front page is an excellent idea, as it’s the first thing people see and plays a key role in setting the tone for your entire portfolio.

@Raheel It's excellent that you want to focus on improving your writing. To do this, aim to make your explanations clear, concise, and reflective of your creative process. Breaking down technical details into simple steps and maintaining a consistent tone will help. You could even ask for feedback on specific sections of your writing to identify areas for improvement.

@Allyssha It’s great that you’re aware of the need for more photos and details. This self-awareness is the first step to improvement. Focus on presenting your work with visuals that complement your text, and remember to explain the significance of each photo to make it meaningful. Expanding on your ideas and providing context will also make your portfolio much stronger.

@Jason
It’s great to see that you have taken this task seriously and submitted your work on paper. It is truly heart-warming to hear that you’re eager to work harder. Let’s collaborate to make your portfolio for this project truly outstanding.

@SorenCB
Your submission is clearly presented and easy to follow, well done! Please don’t be afraid of making mistakes—perfection is not the goal. What’s most important is that you submit your work and actively engage in the class activities, where I can offer you constructive feedback and points for improvement. Remember, there’s no right or wrong, just a focus on continual progress. You’ve definitely started this semester on a strong footing—keep it up!