@Chris Your writing is clear, and you’ve conveyed your ideas well. However, you could improve your work by explaining the features of Mr. Potato Head, as the reader may not be familiar with the product. Briefly describe the features from Mr. Potato Head you want to see in the final design. This extra detail will make your work more informative and accessible to all readers.

The reason I have selected this design was because I wanted to make something with the strengths of good durability, low cost, funny, and could be organized well. However some of the weaknesses that had came was the ability to color well as well as the quality of the product. But overall the design is a very simple and easy to produce with funny features.

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