Developing Ideas

Raifah

Gary Hind

@Raifah Comprehensive Documentation: It’s great to see that you’re working on documenting all sections. This shows you’re staying organised and progressing steadily.
Thoughtful Approach: I like how you’ve considered safety in your chosen design. This is an important aspect, and it’s great to see you addressing it early on.
Suggestions for Improvement:
Combine All Sections: Consider adding all your sections into one document. This will make your work more cohesive and easier to review as a complete portfolio.
Add Visuals and Structure: Include the sketches you’ve completed so far to enhance your work, and make sure to add a title page and a contents page. This will give your document a polished and professional look.

Now that you have the content, start to focus on the structure and visuals. This will elevate your work and help it stand out even more. Keep up the great work!