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@James
Strong Start on Structure: I like how you’ve made a start on organising the structure of your work. It’s a solid foundation to build on.
Next steps:
Focus on Key Sections: Prioritise section 2, Identify and Prioritise the Research, and section 6, Develop Design Ideas. Since this IDU project doesn’t cover all aspects of the design cycle, these areas should be your primary focus.
Combine Work into One Document: The next step is to consolidate all your work into one Word document. Ensure you include visuals and all your completed work to date.
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@Chris Please see attached a guideline for portfolio. You have missed the first section so please only focus from "Developing idea". Portfolio Template.docx
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My idea is to combine the rules and the field of football and the basketball court and the rules of basketball. I think it's the right decision to allow both hands and feet to play. It will be possible to score goals and dribble with both hands and feet. This will allow you to diversify the game and make it more interesting. You will also need to change the ball and its size for a better size and grip with your hand and foot. You will need to make it 5" and the ball material should be similar to a basketball.The number of players in the team will remain the same and the rules regarding the ball leaving the field will remain the same. The rules regarding penalties and footrests will remain the same as in football, and the penalty will be awarded with both a hand and a foot, as desired by the penalty taker.
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@Mihika
Your portfolio is looking well structured, and you’re presenting your work clearly. I noticed some signs that you have used AI in your process, which is fine as AI can be a helpful research tool.
For example, "Sure! Based on the feedback survey you've gathered, here's a suggested Part D that summarizes the findings and reflects on how the game can be improved. This is written in a way that fits well into a portfolio or project report:"
However, please remember that you shouldn’t cut and paste directly from AI sources. Instead, use the information you find to support your understanding and then express ideas in your own words.
It’s important to apply your own critical thinking skills when evaluating your game. Reflect on what aspects went well and what aspects didn’t go as planned. By sharing your personal observations and insights, you’ll demonstrate a deeper understanding of the design process and improve the overall quality of your portfolio.
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@Quentin You’ve made a good start in organising your results, and your observations give some useful insights. Here’s how you can build on them:
Preference for Indoors: It’s great that you noted people prefer playing indoors. You could further explore why this might be. Does it make the game more comfortable (e.g., avoiding weather issues), or do people feel it’s safer? This could help in deciding the setting for your new game.
Likes and Dislikes:
Soccer/Football: Highlighting that people like passing, kicking, and winning is a strong point. These are exciting elements to include in your game. On the dislikes, getting hit seems to be a common concern. You could suggest ways to design your game safely, such as by using softer balls or rules that minimise physical contact. Basketball: Shooting and passing are popular, which is valuable insight. Similar to soccer, the dislike of getting hit can guide how you structure the game to keep it fun and safe.Unanswered Question: The fact that no one answered one of your questions is an important observation. Ask yourself why this might be—was the question unclear, or perhaps people didn’t feel they had an answer? This could be an opportunity to simplify or rephrase the question to gather more insights in the future.
You’ve identified some key likes and dislikes, which is great! To take it further, try combining these insights into specific ideas for your game. For example, think about how to balance the popular activities (e.g., passing, shooting, kicking) with ways to make the game fair and safe for everyone.
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@Joa
You’re making good progress on your portfolio so far, but there’s still room to build on your work to create a stronger and more complete document. Here are some suggestions and next steps to improve and enhance your portfolio:
Add a contents page
A contents page will help organise your portfolio and make it easier for the reader to navigate through your work. Make sure to include all main sections and sub-sections, and align them with the Design cycle where relevant. This will show both organisation and a strong understanding of the framework.
Include visuals
To make your portfolio more engaging, incorporate images of the work you’ve done so far. You can use cut and paste to add sketches or screenshots from your progress. Ensure the images are positioned clearly in the document and include brief captions to explain what each image represents.
Details about your chosen game
In the “Creating the solution” section, include specific details about the game you’ve chosen to focus on. This section is key to documenting your thought process and the purpose behind your design choices.
Evaluation
When reflecting on your work, go beyond summarising what you’ve done. Include ideas on how the solution could be more fun and less confusing for users.
Could the visuals, rules, or layout of the game be simplified to ensure ease of use?
Are there additional features that could enhance enjoyment or engagement?
Provide specific suggestions for improvement, such as incorporating clearer instructions, simplifying the design, or adding a creative element to make the game more entertaining.
By focusing on these points, your portfolio will become clearer, more detailed, and more reflective of your creative process. You have a great foundation to build on, and I’m confident you can create an excellent final portfolio.
