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Entry 1
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@Mihika Here’s my feedback :
- Clear Layout and Organisation: Your use of headings, tables, and bullet points makes the portfolio easy to read and understand. This is a great approach to presenting your work clearly.
- Logical Structure: I really like how you are following the design cycle with your headings. It shows that you understand the process and are documenting it systematically.
- Exceeding Expectations: Your work so far exceeds the submission requirements for Wednesday, which is very impressive and shows you’re putting in significant effort.
Suggestions for Improvement:
- Include Work on Venn Diagram: Make sure to include the work you did on the Venn diagram by simply copying and pasting it from your previous work. There’s no need to rewrite it, which should save you some time.
- Write Design Brief in 3rd Person: When writing the design brief section, remember it should be in 3rd person (e.g., "A game will be designed that combines fundamental skills...") rather than 1st person (e.g., "I will design..."). You can use "I" only when introducing the section. This will make your brief sound more formal and professional.
- Don’t Overinvest in Design Brief: Keep in mind that for this IDU, the design brief section is not part of the assessment rubric. There’s no need to spend too much time on this part—focus on other areas that directly contribute to your assessment.
- Add a Sketch with Annotations for B3: For the Develop a Final Chosen Design section (B3), don’t forget to include a sketch of your chosen idea with annotations. This will help visually communicate your concept more effectively.
This is a fantastic beginning, and the effort you’ve put in really shows. Once you incorporate the minor adjustments suggested above, your portfolio will become even stronger. Great job—keep up the amazing work!
